I have a Social teacher. Her full name is Reny Indrias Kuntari, but we usually call her Mrs. Reny. She is about forty six years old. She lives in Plandi Utara 62 Jombang.
Mrs. Reny is slim and tall. She has an oval face. She has long, straight, and black hair. She never ponitails her beautiful hair. Mrs. Reny has a bright skin. Her eyes are black. She is also a beautiful woman.
She is a kind person. She always teaches us patiently. She always help everyone who need her help. Usually, she gives us a presentation for study before we get an examination. And that makes us easier to study and understand the matery.
She is really a good and kind teacher.
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BalasHapusIt's a good text, Ayu, but it needs a bit correction on the use of the simple present tense. The word 'help' in line 5 should be 'helps'. The word 'need' in line 7 should be 'needs'. The word 'for' in line 7 should be replaced by 'to'. The last sentence should not starts with the word 'and'. It's better if you replace the sentence with "It makes us study and understand the material easily"
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